I found this story to be very disappointing. It wasn’t bad. It was just underdeveloped. It seemed to rush in many areas where I would have liked for the pace to slow down and dig a little deeper into the people, the scene, or the emotions. Several places within the story the author could have gone in much more depth to give the story meat.
There was one very explicit scene. I felt that it was unneeded and only put there for the attention such a scene would get. In attention, the language was crude, in my opinion. You can have an extremely steamy scene without having to use words I consider crude. It took the romantic aspect out of the scene and made it appear dirty.
From there the story seemed to rush itself even more. I was left unfilled and with too many questions. The story has much potential. I think it needs to be heavily fleshed out and given more meat to it.
Note: I received this book from free download on Amazon with no expectation of a positive review.